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Mageddon725
AvatarRokusGhost
Lady Lostris
• 2/26/2014

Final revisions on my chapter

I know I post a lot of these, but I just want to enable us to communicate even if we can't meet often. Anyway, are we still doing the fatigue for characters far away from their world? I've been considering it as I've taken to revising things here and there in the revised chapter five (six in actuality, I think), and I have several questions. Have we made provisions for that as a story element in prior chapters, and what was our initial reason for including it? My memory on that end is a bit hazy, and I want to have that clarified before I add my revisions to the existing chapter, if possible.

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Wordbender
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• 2/26/2014

Eum... no idea if revisions of the sort were made. I believe the original reasoning for that was that the vortexes were connected to the characters' energy and that, since each energy has its own place, they feel the effect from being too long where they don't belong. However, I also think we came up with the reasoning as a way to get rid of Ling, who would get injured while entering a vortex. Though since we're no longer getting rid of Ling -we're not, right?- I don't think this matters much anymore.

Perhaps we should start thinking about creating an article about the vortexes on which we pile all the relevant information about them. If it's of decent quality, we might even post it on the wiki.

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• 2/27/2014

If we're going to use that, we should really start in Silent Heroes and Chapter 6. How many "worlds away" would they have to be away from their own in order to feel it?

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• 2/27/2014

Hm.....I'm of a mind to just scrap that aspect entirely, as neither reason LL provided above is really relevant anymore.

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• 3/3/2014

I believe we did begin it as a way to get Ling out, yes. Still, I think it would be interesting for the vortex to have side effects on the characters. *shrug*

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